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I'm quiet and shy, but obnoxious and loud
It just depends whose opinion you ask,
I'm beautiful, yet ugly
I wear more than one mask.
I'm happy and bubbly, boring and sad
The best and worst friend you've had,
I'm humble, conceited
And I won't be defeated.

I'm set in my ways, but a walking contradiction
Changing for people seems to be my addiction.

I am stubborn, but am easy to persuade
It just depends on the moon and the tides,
I love you dearly, yet hate you so much
I'm just one big thrill ride.
I needed you then, but now I really don't
I'll be nice and then I won't,
I'm coming, I'm going
Ignorant and all-knowing.

I'm set in my ways, but a walking contradiction
Changing for people seems to be my addiction.

I'm consistently inconsistent,
Unpredictably predictable
Perfectly imperfect
Unashamedly shameful.

I'm set in my ways, but a walking contradiction
Changing for people seems to be my addiction.
A bit of who I am.
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sealgirl922 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
This poem is absolutely beautifully written, and so easy to relate to. Great job!
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cvdemigod Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010
What can I say that has not been said....
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HouseOfGimp Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010
:hug:
That still means a lot to me. So, thank you.
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Deathnote162 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing, I can totally relate! Great job!! I love your poems, keep up the great work! (:
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HouseOfGimp Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010
Thank you so much.
I shall certainly try to keep up the apparently great work. :)
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NightWitch55 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Beautifully written. I completely understand where you're coming from.
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HouseOfGimp Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2010
Thank you. I really appreciate your feedback, and it's humbling to know I've able to write something people seem to relate to so well.
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dolphin64575 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I try not to change how I act, but I always end up doing it. :tighthug: nice mood, flow and rhyme.
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HouseOfGimp Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2010
Sadly, we all do. :no:

And thank you so much! :huggle:
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amerevengeance Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
"We've got the gunslinger extraordinaire, walking contradiction
And I for one can see no blood from the hearts and the wrists you allegedly slit"

I can identify most with this part:
I'm quiet and shy, but obnoxious and loud
It just depends whose opinion you ask


And sadly, this part applies if you ask a certain ex-friend =/
The best and worst friend you've had

It's amazing how much we change how we act, all just depending on who we're around. Most of the time I don't even realize I'm doing it, but in hindsight, it's obvious.
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